Here is another one of my assignments. The paper I wrote was about the creation of this blog!
Reflect
upon the peer review process for project one.
Did you get some helpful feedback? Is there anything you could have done
to improve the quality and helpfulness of the feedback you received? (Ask
leading questions, post earlier in the week, etc.) Can you think of a question
you would like to have added to the peer review questions? If so, what? When
reading your peers’ work, did you gain a new understanding of the assignment of
its value? Explain. Did reading your peers’ work help you with your revision?
In what way/s?
Submitting
my paper for the peer review process was rather intimidating. I mean, I have written papers before, many
times. Those were more formal, traditional
research type papers and they weren’t submitted to my peers, only to my
professors. I read and re-read my paper
for a couple of days before I finally bit the bullet and hit “submit”.
I got
some positive feedback on the creation of my blog and how it represents
me. I also got some feedback questioning
how this relates to me and my life. In
reading over my paper for yet another time, I feel that it does adequately
represent the fact that I live a clean and simple life.
I’m not
sure that there was anything I could have done to improve the quality and
helpfulness of the feedback I received because I did post earlier in the week
but only had two of my fellow students review my paper.
I think
the questions were thorough and covered the aspects of the assignment.
In
reading my peer’s papers, I noticed that some of them created avatars that were
almost exact replicas of themselves, some who created a fantasy version of
themselves and some who started with a fantasy version of themselves and later
changed it to be a more accurate version of their true selves. It was interesting to read their reasoning
for each of their choices. I am of the thinking
that I need to have mine be a true and accurate representation of me.
I don’t
think reading my peers work caused me to change my paper in any way because I
created something that truly represents me.
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